hame to laga tha ki aap kewal kitabo ki kadar karte hain, par aap to kaafi achi shero shayari bhi kar lete hain, zindagi se itne gila shikwa mat kijiye, jo kuch mila hai uske liye khuda ka shukriya kijiye.
haan dost but nyways briliantlly written shayari. You have all the makings of a poet man. After watching 3 idiots you can now gather the courage to tell your mom that you want to make poetry as your profession.
haan mujhe bhi yahi lagne laga hai ...main poet kitna acha hun ye pata nahi ... par ismein mera man lagta hai........mujhe aacha lagta hai ....lagta hai ki yahi kaam karun .....or kahin ab man nahi lagta
hame to laga tha ki aap kewal kitabo ki kadar karte hain,
ReplyDeletepar aap to kaafi achi shero shayari bhi kar lete hain,
zindagi se itne gila shikwa mat kijiye,
jo kuch mila hai uske liye khuda ka shukriya kijiye.
shayad last line pe apne focus nahi kia usme likhe hai zindagi se koi gila nahi
ReplyDeletemaine pehli 3 lines ke liye likha hai
ReplyDeleteok ....nahi yaar ye to bus dard hai ...kuch gum tumhe to sab pata hi hai
ReplyDeletehaan dost
ReplyDeletebut nyways briliantlly written shayari.
You have all the makings of a poet man.
After watching 3 idiots you can now gather the courage to tell your mom that you want to make poetry as your profession.
haan mujhe bhi yahi lagne laga hai ...main poet kitna acha hun ye pata nahi ... par ismein mera man lagta hai........mujhe aacha lagta hai ....lagta hai ki yahi kaam karun .....or kahin ab man nahi lagta
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